Kiwi Day N
by ColdFusion
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Sometimes bombs just appear. Looks like it shrinks a bit between the panels. You can see some awkwardness around Hel's sandals when she walks. I never quite knew how to draw them, like should they be coming off a bit when you bend your foot? a sandal can't really bend...
Man, this is one DIVERSE dungeon. No real theme to it. I thought out the other dungeons in this little arc with more consistency. I think that if you tried to make an ice bridge out of most other animals, it wouldn't be as nice and solid. Gotta go with slugs or jellyfish for that. And it goes without saying it'd be tougher than just ice on its own.
I was trying to make a running gag here out of Riven losing her self-confidence, but it was pretty flimsy.
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